Dapper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[im a dog]

That's mean >:(

I feel bad for that dog, you know it may have been a joke but some people would get really angry with this video... Was it okay in the end? Anyway, as a movie, it's awful, repetitive and annoying as hell. There's no plot at all.

[Found some poo]

Oh come on now...

Did you not stop to realise that poop jokes are the lowest form of comedy? The song was rather annoying as well. I guess you could improve it by doing the opposite of, well... everything I've mentioned above?

["EXTINCT"]

Brilliant...

It really annoys me how this was on front page for a short time. Why was it so short? This flash deserves much more.

Firstly, the animation is amazing. You obviously took quite a while to animate it, create the background and use the after effects. The animation was smooth, especially when the animal was turning his head multiple times, and the way you animated the running cycles with the animal, that was great as well!

Nice choice of colours too.

The storyline was great. It was simple, but it really didn't need to be too complicated. It was very sad, so well done on that. You also did a lot of building up to the trap scene.

All I can say, is that I really do look forward to your work in the future. This movie was great, nothing like it here. It's a shame about how underrated it is!

9/10

manuelberja responds:

thanks man...
i appreciate it!
:)

[Glad0s]

Wow...

This is pretty original. I like it. Nice animation, pretty random, but ok...

[Windows 6]

Good concept...

It was a great concept making an animation on a fictional 'Windows 6', but with a few more coats of paint - 'Windows 6' could have been so much better...

For starters, it was a loop. It is highly recommended that you use a Preloader to avoid any confusion with the viewers.

The art wasn't bad, it was just quite boring, the colours were mainly the problem. I suggest you look on ways to make the art look better, for example, since this is a fictional Windows system you have made, you could do any layout you'd like on it. The desktop background would look a lot better if you had drawn it yourself, be creative, I'd personally prefer it if you'd made the art yourself.

The animation; well there wasn't much of it, really. The cursor moved a few times, but that was it. When there actually was animation, it was quite static. I could understand how hard it would be to put an effective animation on a movie mimicking your own Windows system, but look into ways you can surprise people.

Great concept, but with a few flaws that let it down. I hope you could learn from what I've explained, and I look forward to your things in the future!

[The Man Who Could Sit...]

LOL!

This is the best one so far (in my opinion) of the Cyanide and Happiness series!

[U: Submission Day]

Awesome!

That got my 5. Can't wait for the next one.

Blakant responds:

thank you for ur 5! I'll b sure to make the 2nd part better... :)

[Blue. Trailer [canceled]]

Wow!

Great animation. I'm favouriting you so I can see when the actual flash comes out!

OfficialFredLozano responds:

Thanks. The final version should be out late March-- possibly early April.

[HUNGER]

Wow!

That was great! Love the art, simple, but nice.

[Take on Me 8bit Loop]

So basically...

You took the original music video and just pixelated it slightly with an annoying loop. Nice one.

ScriptorSothe responds:

oh nice clock crew avi, what have you made besides spamming desu or pokemon porn