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[SRM Star Wars Holiday!]

Stick to this style :)

You don't even know how excited I was as soon as I clicked the link to this Flash, Battosai!

As soon as it played, I was very impressed at the FBF, especially as SRM was explaining the Star Wars movie with all that body movement - that was great. And, not much later, the animation when Mel got on and off the couch was great. It was a slow FBF animation, but it worked well, because it was done so smoothly. Nice choice of colours for the background!

Please stick to this animation style, it IS lively, and keep it like that.

There are the slightest things to improve on, though, for example at some points, the drawings look crummy, but that's not much of a big deal. Maybe when you develop your FBF skills even more, you could add lighting effects to the characters' bodies - like with what you did on your previous movies.

As with the plot - so damn funny! I love how AGAIN Mel falls unconscious! Poor Mel :(

"You could've stopped... JUDGEMENT DAY."

"MWWWWAAAAAUUUUUHHHH!!!"

Battosai810 responds:

I really want to add (at the very least) some basic shading to flesh out the characters more. This is really me tearing down my old style and trying something new! Very happy you liked the new style.

Your suggestions have been noted - thanks for watching!

[Comme un Poisson]

Win...

You, sir, are a genius.

[Microcosm]

Very Imaginative...

Definitely a great and memorable Flash, since there's never been anything like this before!

[A kitty goes shopping]

Weird...

..but, I like it :D

[Metal Slug Apocalypse 2]

Not the full version, eh?

Slow FPS, No sound, sprites have the wrong size compared to that ship, big screen resolution considering this is a sprite flash, therefore a very ugly quality.

Please fix these mistakes for the full version.

thescorpionmaster responds:

No.

[Strawberries]

Very interesting...

The whole concept of this flash is good and works, two strawberries befriending each other, getting into all sorts of shenanigans.

The animation needs improvement, since the movement is all static and still, you really need to work on that, for example; give the strawberries arms and even legs if you wish, it will make it looks so much better when animated. Practice on Flash for at least a month, and you'll come back with some great results.

It wouldn't be a bad idea to make a part 2 of this, especially if you improve the animation, as I said above.

Overall, this isn't bad since it's your first. I hope you look into and understand this review :D

Sidorio responds:

I appreiate the review, except for the comment about practicing flash for a month. I do have 110 submissions and four years experience, you know.

Just kidding, I'm shit.

[The Real World!]

Wow...

What a crazy movie I just watched. I especially love the intro and you hear Mel's voice saying 'The Real World!'

Reading the author's comments, I can imagine how much frustration there would have been, I've had similar problems with the audio and playback, then completing it only to be rated 0 by some loser who can't give a constructive review.

Battosai810 responds:

I'm pretty sure I got a bunch of abusive reviews for this one, but they've all been deleted.
You read the description and know I didn't like this cartoon, but a few fans of my work do. Thanks for watching, and glad you enjoyed it.

[The Tucan Show]

good

good